⭐学生1: 讲故事的时候

I went to the village last year. It was summer vacation. We rented a car, and my dad drove it to our destination. Along the journey, I saw picturesque scenery out of the window. We saw there was a car accident and a man got injured. My dad stopped and wanted to send that man to the hospital, got him into our car without hesitation, headed to the hospital. We arrived at the hospital within three hours.

凯老师：

part2 讲故事的时候，没有用到连接词或者信号词来连接句子，这会影响连贯性哦！

解析： 

讲故事的时候有很多逻辑可以帮助我们提高内容的逻辑性和连贯性。

比如：

故事的开头可以用：

First of all

To start off with

Initially

To begin with

之后发生的事件：

Then

After that

Next

As soon as / When + full clause

...but then

Immediately

故事转折：

Suddenly

Unexpectedly

故事结尾：

Finally

In the end

Eventually

⭐学生2：

He established his own commercial empire using his name.

凯老师：

He established his own commercial empire which was named after his name.

解析：

以……命名的表达是：be named after

⭐学生3:

I‘d like to hang out with my friends on weekend. And we go shopping together, go to the cinema together. And sometimes we even play basketball together.

凯老师：

在连接句子的时候用了好几个and, 这会影响词汇多样性。除此之外，三句话用了三个together， 这也会影响词汇多样性哦。有两种方法，第一，把三个活动放在一句话里罗列出来，把together删掉就可以啦，或者单独进行具体讲解。单独讲解的时候可以用一下连词或者信号词。

解析1: 

分点讨论的时候可以使用以下逻辑结构：

第一点：  

I’d like to begin by saying …

The first thing I’d like to mention is …

第二点：

On top of that I can also add that …

Another interesting point …

第三点：

Finally， I’d also like to mention …

And , I shouldn’t forget to mention that…

解析2: 

有很多连词都可以用来连接句子的哦，比如说and ，plus， additionally ，in addition besides ，what's more， on the other hand等等，这样可以提高连贯性以及词汇多样性！ 

⭐学生4：

He was extremely talented and a full of creativity.

凯老师：

He is extremely talented and full of creativity.

解析：

描述人物（外貌，性格，工作，兴趣爱好，成就，家乡，年龄）， 若这个人活着，用一般现在时，若这个人已故，用过去时。拖这个人还活着，但是这个特征是过去独有，用过去时。

⭐学生5: 

Every day I will come back home together.

凯老师：

Every day we go back home together.

解析：

在描述一般发生的事情的时候，Everyday是一般现在时的标志哦。

⭐学生6:

He singed a song with nine languages.

凯老师：

He sang a song in nine languages.

解析：

sing 的一般式-过去式-过去分词分别为：sing—sang—sung

题目：what did you do last weekend

⭐学生7:

That's really an enjoyable weekend.

凯老师：

That was really an enjoyable weekend.

解析：

这个问题考官主要考察的是时态，对过去时的描述，同时对日常生活的描述，所以这种题目时态很重要，都要用过去时。

⭐学生8: 

Such as supermarket and mall.

凯老师：

Such as Supermarkets and malls.

解析：

supermarket 和 mall 是可数名词，可数名词单数不能单独出现哦。

以下是学员在打卡过程中发音出错率最高的10个词汇：

famous /ˈfeɪməs/ adj. 著名的，出名的

feel /fiːl/ v. 感受到，体会到，觉得

felt /felt/ v. 感受到，体会到；觉得；（feel 的过去式和过去分词）

especially /ɪˈspeʃəli/ adv. 尤其，特别；专门，特地

enter /ˈentə(r)/ v. 进入；开始从事，开始做

tons /tʌnz/ n. 吨；大量；许多（ton 的复数形式）

kinds /kaɪndz/ n. 种类；特征 （kind 的复数）

test /test/ n. （书面或口头的）测验，考试

taste /teɪst/ n. 味道，滋味；味觉

style /staɪl/ n. 方式，作风；款式，样式

同学们可以多听多练，相信口语发音水平一定会得到提升！